Post by Moonlight Wings on Dec 9, 2007 9:29:22 GMT -5
At the Sister Angela page:
"My insticts are great!" Akane asks
It should be:
"My instincts are great!" Akane asks.
And(In the same page):
"Starlight Honeymoon Therapy Kiss" attack, and transforms back into Akane Gushiken.
It should be:
"Starlight Honeymoon Therapy Kiss" attack, and the phage transforms back into Akane Gushiken.
Or
"Starlight Honeymoon Therapy Kiss" attack, and Sailor Director transforms back into Akane Gushiken.
>_< Betty-chan, it's up to you what you would choose.
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sailor Mars points a huge flaming arrow at her. Mars tells her, "if you insist on fighting, I'll be your opponent!" She turns to Eternal Sailor Moon and says, "Now, Sailor Moon..."
It should be:
Sailor Mars points a huge flaming arrow at her. Mars tells her, "if you insist on fighting, I'll be your opponent!" Mars speak(or spoke) to Eternal Sailor Moon and says, "Now, Sailor Moon..."
.__. i guess my translation isn't nice, but if you find idea's on above(not the akane gushiken thing)
In soul-hunter.com/sailormoon/television/summaries/176.php
The bell rings, and Usagi and Minako are shown standing outside the school, clasping hands. Usagi says, "As we thought, we have to take the make-up exams, don't we, Minako?" With tears in her eyes, Minako replies, "If we fail the make-up exam, we still have the make-up class, Usagi!" Worried
It should be:
The bell rings, Usagi and Minako are shown standing outside the school, clasping hands. Usagi says, "As we thought, we have to take the make-up exams, don't we, Minako?" With tears in her eyes, Minako replies, "If we fail the make-up exam, we still have the make-up class, Usagi!" Minako said, worriedly.
"My insticts are great!" Akane asks
It should be:
"My instincts are great!" Akane asks.
And(In the same page):
"Starlight Honeymoon Therapy Kiss" attack, and transforms back into Akane Gushiken.
It should be:
"Starlight Honeymoon Therapy Kiss" attack, and the phage transforms back into Akane Gushiken.
Or
"Starlight Honeymoon Therapy Kiss" attack, and Sailor Director transforms back into Akane Gushiken.
>_< Betty-chan, it's up to you what you would choose.
~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sailor Mars points a huge flaming arrow at her. Mars tells her, "if you insist on fighting, I'll be your opponent!" She turns to Eternal Sailor Moon and says, "Now, Sailor Moon..."
It should be:
Sailor Mars points a huge flaming arrow at her. Mars tells her, "if you insist on fighting, I'll be your opponent!" Mars speak(or spoke) to Eternal Sailor Moon and says, "Now, Sailor Moon..."
.__. i guess my translation isn't nice, but if you find idea's on above(not the akane gushiken thing)
In soul-hunter.com/sailormoon/television/summaries/176.php
The bell rings, and Usagi and Minako are shown standing outside the school, clasping hands. Usagi says, "As we thought, we have to take the make-up exams, don't we, Minako?" With tears in her eyes, Minako replies, "If we fail the make-up exam, we still have the make-up class, Usagi!" Worried
It should be:
The bell rings, Usagi and Minako are shown standing outside the school, clasping hands. Usagi says, "As we thought, we have to take the make-up exams, don't we, Minako?" With tears in her eyes, Minako replies, "If we fail the make-up exam, we still have the make-up class, Usagi!" Minako said, worriedly.
