Stars is Punished critique?

[Moonstar]

This is the little test/preview of my project.
I wanted to share my progress with the "Sailor Stars is punished!" idea that I had.


If any of you are familiar with PGSM, you might have seen a
seperate part called "Sailor Moon is punished" where the actresses
talk about and highlight episodes, about production,
and all that (4 per session). I have thought of doing something
similar with Sailor Moon Stars, with the characters talking about
episodes, scenes, but not production (since they are fictional).

youtube.com/watch?v=MrLMYYD7ywo

Feedback on the video and the music I also need some
ideas for what scenes to use in segments.

Critique is welcome, flames are not.

[SeraFirefly]

The link isn't working for me. It says that the URL contained a malformed video ID.

[Moonstar]

sorry about that. Fixed it.

[Ian]

Huh. Worked for me.

My Comment: Good job! I think more discussion and subtitles at the bottom of the scene instead of the middle would be good.

[Larry Laffer]

Ian's right, splashing comments in the middle of the screen just doesn't feel right.


That and the audio is a bit messed up at 00:10.

[Moonstar]

ah, ok. I see your point, it's kind of distracting ne? unfortunately, Window Movie Maker puts everything in the middle. And I'll work on the music too. ^^

Do you know what program I can use? I can download a trial from adobe but only for trial.

[Ian]

No, it doesn't actually. I forget how, but there IS a way to have subtitles at the bottom.

Edit: Found it, In ''Titles, One Line" it's underneath Stretch and above Basic Title.

[Larry Laffer]

As for the sound, I suggest you use Audacity. Quite easy to use!