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Post by alexander on Jul 31, 2006 12:25:40 GMT -5
The title pretty much says it all. Please be honest.   |
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Post by mikarin on Jul 31, 2006 12:41:30 GMT -5
Hmm...
The image is nice, but I think you should use another colour instead of blue for the bottom part of the layout. Maybe pick out a colour from the image itself. The blue looks a tad out of place.
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Post by numbmelody on Jul 31, 2006 12:45:37 GMT -5
I think it looks okay except for the massive space of white to the right of the main content. Maybe you could add a subtle pattern as the background or something...
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Post by alexander on Jul 31, 2006 13:32:27 GMT -5
I think it looks okay except for the massive space of white to the right of the main content. Maybe you could add a subtle pattern as the background or something... I also thought I should use a pattern for the background, but eventually I decided that the image wouldn't be... uumm... It wouldn't focus the viewer's attention on itself. Hmm... The image is nice, but I think you should use another colour instead of blue for the bottom part of the layout. Maybe pick out a colour from the image itself. The blue looks a tad out of place. I agree. How about using grey? Thanks to both of you, your comments were really helpful! |
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Post by Betty Ann on Jul 31, 2006 13:52:05 GMT -5
I think the image is nice (I even used it for one of my layouts once!), but the blue doesn't really match. Use something from the image, like tan or grey or even pink. The lines are maybe also a bit harsh when compared to the delicacy of the actual image. I THINK I see little diagonal lines on the image itself, is that right? Why not continue with those same diagonal lines on the bottom of the picture, rather than the thick blue lines. Just use light grey diagonal lines there. I also think you should add something to the white space. Since you're already using the diagonal lines in the main content area, why not just use a very light tan or grey solid color instead of white? OR put the diagonal lines on the outside of the content layer and the solid color on the inside (which is what I would probably do).
And the last thing I have to say is that you should make sure you use antialiasing for your text in the graphics! It makes the edges a lot smoother. Just open your graphics program, and click on "Anti-alias" when you put your text on there.
Your layouts have really, really improved since you first started making websites. Good work ^^;
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Post by Tritogeneia on Jul 31, 2006 13:54:59 GMT -5
What Betty Ann said.  |
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