Can Someone Help???

[winxgirl56]

I made this site for school and I was wondering if I could get some opinions on it.http://www.freewebs.com/joshuamathews/

[usagiss]

i like it its good especially when you talked about Sadako Sasaki it be better if you added a little more info though but its still great

[winxgirl56]

thanks

[winxgirl56]

anybody else

[Tritogeneia]

I like your idea, I just saw a movie about suffragettes and how they fought for women's rights.
It's good but it can always get better...so my comments (and none of them are meant in a rude/mean way): I wasn't able to see all the pics, are they not there or just not working? Also, the black-yellow scheme is a bit...boring...and it makes the whole page look well, it doesn't draw interest (aj, will I get smitten! ;D )
But the content is really good...maybe you should try to broaden it with additional info about suffragettes and the woman's rights movement and that kind of stuff, you know, create a background for the people who made a difference and why were their doings so important.
Keep on the good work!

[winxgirl56]

Oops I'm sorry for the images I lost the password to my photobucket. What would make you smitern

[Tritogeneia]

I mean to say I'll get a minus karma point because I criticized your site too much. I mean it as a joke but I guess it sounded funnier in my head. ;D

[Okayadokari]

The text in yellow near the bottom is very difficult to read. You should change it to a much darker colour. I'm not too sure about the main red text (it should be avoided unless you're emphasising something). You could change it to very dark red such as #660000 or even black. It might be also better if you aligned the text to the left rather than the centre. I like the background image though... gives that calm "feminine" feel.